Now this is a very interesting take on Jaded. The ending stumped me ..."death DUE us part" ...and then I ran to the dictionary, and sure enough ... it works well!Sorry about that, had to redo it .... small error, I added "to".
Nice one.I too have written somewhat along the same line.
Interesting and creative take on jaded.
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Now this is a very interesting take on Jaded. The ending stumped me ...
"death DUE us part" ...
and then I ran to the dictionary, and sure enough ... it works well!
Sorry about that, had to redo it .... small error, I added "to".
Nice one.
I too have written somewhat along the same line.
Interesting and creative take on jaded.
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